Creative Critical Reflection

The Outdoorsmen Final Submission

2 Page Article Revision

The top one is the original before revisions. I changed the title so it matched the text of the article itself as well as making it fill more of the empty space at the top of the article. I also added the website of the magazine by the page numbers.

Table of Contents Revision

The picture on the bottom is the original before revisions. On the top picture i changed on of the pictures as well as lining up the bottom of the truck picture with the top of Lake Istokpoga rather than having it overlap.

Cover Page Revison

The top picture is the original picture that I posted for my Quarter 3 submission. I changed the size of the article title "RECORD BREAKING DEER IN TENNESSEE" I made it smaller and moved it away from the border. I also added a label that showed which issue it was as well as removing the barcode.

Quarter 3 Revisions

After I presented my project to the class they gave me a few idea on how to better revise my magazine.

On the cover page they told me I should adjust one of my article titles so it is the same size as the rest of them as well as moving it away from the edge of the border so it adds more contrast against the border. They also told me to remove the clip-art bar code that I had on the cover because they did not know if it would be acceptable.

On the table of contents they told me to add an article that I had on the cover of the magazine in the table of contents.

In my article they told me to adjust the font of my title so they could better see it as well as filling in some of the empty space at the top of the page.

Quarter 3 Submission